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Melody
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Cooler - it’s amazing the fear vindictive exes can strike in a person’s heart. Fortunately, it was quickly resolved in this short. Cute!
— Oct 11, 2020 10:49PM
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Melody
is 91% done
Friends - I liked this one! It felt only a little rushed, but only because I needed and WANTED more background! I love the idea behind the story and wish there was more!
— Oct 11, 2020 10:28PM
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Melody
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Picturing Us - it was ok. Kind of a lot of issues to fit into such a short story that took place during the course of a couple hours. It needed more time to stretch and grow into what it could have been.
— Oct 11, 2020 10:00PM
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Melody
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Without Saying a Word - well, this one just had me crying! What a touching relationship the two characters had. Love truly can overcome whatever barriers are put before you!
— Oct 10, 2020 09:52PM
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Melody
is 69% done
Seashell Secrets - Ok. This was great. And I’m really getting a feeling of getting the best, climactic parts of a story to indulge in. I need more!
— Oct 10, 2020 09:34PM
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Melody
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Come Rain or Shine - cute! I wish I was more like Angelique, happy and brave and generous with her time. I think we all need someone like that in their life. Good thing Ryan figured out he needed her, too!
— Oct 10, 2020 09:08PM
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Melody
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Picked - yeah! I want more like this one! I look a good YA short. Super cute!
— Oct 10, 2020 08:39PM
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Melody
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Button Peak: Silence from Nashville - that moved quickly! I wasn’t a huge fan of India in the first scene (yikes...), but she mostly redeemed herself. And Ed was totally oblivious. Gosh! 🤦♀️
— Oct 10, 2020 08:21PM
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Melody
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Constance - lovely period short. I liked that Felix finally realized what a dunce he’d been and didn’t waste time in going for what he wanted. Quick learner! Haha!
— Oct 10, 2020 08:04PM
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Melody
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Longtime Love - THIS is why I love reading short stories. That was adorable! *sigh* Some of the other stories felt like they needed more to it to be told correctly, but this one didn’t need more. I WANTED more, though!
— Oct 10, 2020 07:05PM
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Melody
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Tell Me - I feel like this could have been the ending of a much longer story. There was a LOT of past history to pack into this, and while it did an ok job of doing it, it was just ok. 🤷♀️
— Oct 10, 2020 06:32PM
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Melody
is 23% done
Because You’re Engaged: “Ashaan Inti Makhtouba” - that was sweet, though I had a hard time understanding her engagement to Colin. Had that been more hashed out, plus more of what happened in Kuwait, I think that would have made the story better.
— Oct 10, 2020 05:43PM
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Melody
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Royal Burger Crush - oh my gosh, that was so cute! I loved it. I liked how even though the story was short, the characters didn’t feel 2-dimensional, or at least they were given enough background to make it feel like you made a good new friend.
— Oct 10, 2020 05:15PM
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Melody
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Ribbons - that was... abrupt? I mean, I know these stories are short, but she seemed to let go of her grief pretty quickly. I think this one would’ve made a better novella-length story. I’d like to see the story hashed out a bit more.
— Oct 10, 2020 04:02PM
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Jen_C
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Cooler ~ Michelle Pennington. 3.75 stars
Cute high school story. Athlete dumps girlfriend for heroine and they deal with her jealous bullying attempt.
— Mar 07, 2018 04:23PM
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Cute high school story. Athlete dumps girlfriend for heroine and they deal with her jealous bullying attempt.
Jen_C
is 93% done
Chloe brushed by me. “Nice try. Like you’d ever go for Alecia.” “I dated you, didn’t I?” She folded her arms across her chest. “What’s that supposed to mean?” I shrugged and walked past, saying over my shoulder, “I guess I like scary chicks.” I heard her yelling behind me, dropping swear words like they were pennies, but I ignored her.
— Mar 07, 2018 04:12PM
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Jen_C
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Friends ~ Jen Geigle Johnson 3 stars
Actors, friends to love
— Mar 07, 2018 04:02PM
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Actors, friends to love
Jen_C
is 86% done
We fist bumped. As our hands moved apart, we recited together, “Save it for the stage.” Every Friday of high school, Dax and I wore our ‘Save it for the Stage’ t-shirts together. We joked all the way to the event.
— Mar 07, 2018 04:01PM
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Jen_C
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Picturing Us ~ Sara Cardon 3 stars
Overly wordy with adjectives and a bit abstract for me. College girl wants to be runway model but not leave boyfriend.
— Mar 07, 2018 03:42PM
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Overly wordy with adjectives and a bit abstract for me. College girl wants to be runway model but not leave boyfriend.
Jen_C
is 79% done
You’re beautiful, and not for the reasons a modeling gig will tell you,” he whispered in her ear. “There’s something raw and vulnerable about you and the beauty you see in the world. It makes me want to safeguard you.” Noah kept her wrapped tight. “I also want to feed you every chance I get. More than those few crackers you sometimes call lunch.
— Mar 07, 2018 03:35PM
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Jen_C
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Without Saying a Word ~ Melanie Mason
Super short story of newly deaf soldier arriving home and his girl assuring him his isn't broken. Sweetly naive.
3.25 stars
— Mar 06, 2018 08:48PM
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Super short story of newly deaf soldier arriving home and his girl assuring him his isn't broken. Sweetly naive.
3.25 stars
Jen_C
is 71% done
He didn’t want her sympathy. His hearing was gone, shattered in the explosion that had killed half of his men. He’d accepted the loss during the last two months in the hospital in Afghanistan. She rose to her tiptoes and pressed her lips to his cheek. When his eyes met hers all he saw was love. The emotional wall he’d built inside cracked. How he’d missed this. He held her close, praying she could accept him broken.
— Mar 06, 2018 08:17PM
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Jen_C
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Seashell Secrets ~ Rebekah J. Wells
2.5 stars. She got cancer diagnosis, confessed her love, got blown off. Meet up 1 year later. Eco geeks that should have communicated better.
— Mar 06, 2018 07:54PM
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2.5 stars. She got cancer diagnosis, confessed her love, got blown off. Meet up 1 year later. Eco geeks that should have communicated better.
Jen_C
is 62% done
A realization prickled down her spine. Daniel didn’t know about the cancer. She’d gone straight from the doctor’s office to Daniel and blurted out her feelings. When he didn’t say anything in return, Jane blocked his number on her phone, hopped on the first flight home, and started chemo. She hadn’t told him anything.
— Mar 06, 2018 07:32PM
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Jen_C
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Come Rain or Shine ~ Laura L. Walker
3 stars. Single dad and do-gooder neighbor.
— Feb 22, 2018 09:35PM
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3 stars. Single dad and do-gooder neighbor.
Jen_C
is 56% done
Get a grip, man. It’s just a handshake. But it brought back memories of holding his wife’s hand during long walks around the college campus where they met . . . and then at the beach on their honeymoon . . . during their son’s birth . . . while praying with her every night of their marriage . . . and finally when she took her last breath. He hadn’t held a woman’s hand since.
— Feb 22, 2018 09:23PM
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Jen_C
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Picked ~ Rachel John
High school friends figure out a misunderstanding. Cute. 3.25 stars.
— Feb 22, 2018 09:16PM
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High school friends figure out a misunderstanding. Cute. 3.25 stars.
Jen_C
is 50% done
“You know, if things were reversed, and it was Ashley Tipton’s cookie that got ignored, she would have thrown me up against that decorated locker and demanded she had first dibs.” “And you would’ve liked that?” “I would’ve liked it if you did it.”
— Feb 22, 2018 09:14PM
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Jen_C
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Buxton Peak: Silence from Nashville ~ Julie L. Spencer
(Forgot to put 3 stars on last book).
This one had annoying characters and wasn't my taste. 2.5 stars.
— Feb 22, 2018 08:59PM
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(Forgot to put 3 stars on last book).
This one had annoying characters and wasn't my taste. 2.5 stars.

