Status Updates From Wild Fire (The Kingson Prid...

Their inability to suss out a perpetrator makes me question their general level of intelligence. Has anyone else noticed Gabe often cannot find out anything despite his allegedly computer wizardry skills. Apparently Riley can figure out in 30 min what he cannot over days.

Okay, and now I'm remembering that the second half of this totally makes up for any issues I had in the beginning...and even for all the hell and darkness and mess Riley had to go through to get here... Yes!

Gah, ESPECIALLY when it is just filling in the 6 month gap that occurred in the epilogue of the last book! That is just too confusing. Either don't write the epilogue, or put the six months in the prior book if you absolutely must have them.

I had forgotten about the structure on Book 2. While I am still enjoying the story and the characters, I'm really not a fan of the "chapter a month" concept as a way to make time pass quickly and show a developing relationship. I'd rather just have a big time skip and then start again when it's time to start the story again. The gap can easily be filled in with passing references and occasional flashbacks. *sigh*