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Why does Anthony let this stupid asshole rest after damaging him! Then he lets him steal bite. How about punching him in the face before he does that. This book is FUCKING STUPID!

REALLY, who wants to read about a FUCKING IDIOT! It is NOT FUN to read about a stupid person who can't be bothered to read the FUCKING manual on the system. His problems are of his own making. This book is very frustrating because it could be so good if only the MC wasn't so unlikable!

If his house burned down where is his home base!

Why does the author feel the need to describe New York City as "one of the most densely populated cities in the U.S." EVERYONE knows NYC is huge and crowded! And that is the second time that EXACT description was used. It's weird.

His mom is unemployed, perfect time to introduce her to the system. So STUPID! This book is FUCKING STUPID!

Why doesn't Anthony bring his mother and sister into the system! It would be a lot easier on his family. WTF. This MC is so STUPID.

Anthony that FUCKING STUPID looser didn't even use fireball! WTF WTF WTF!!!!!!

How much of a FUCKING looser does this guy have to be!!!! I really hate this book! It is so FUCKING annoying! How about Anthony use BITE! FUCKING IDIOT.

Why does the MC need to be such a dork! The awkwardness with women, the odd statements. How FUCKING cliche.

Why does Anthony have to be such a MORON! He put points into wisdom and intelligence! He should not be this dim witted!!!

So STUPID, he doesn't even check the terminal, he just takes her offer. And is he just going to accept 30 percent! No FUCKING way! He should say 5 percent. If that. She needs him more than he needs her.

How FUCKING LAME! HAPPY DANCE! Is he a 13 year old girl!!! What in the FUCK is wrong with this guy! He is mentally deficient, socially inept, and a total sheep! Can't he figure anything out on his own.

I can't believe how short sighted Anthony is! I am really not liking this book.

Now he has to share the FUCKING loot. STUPID IDIOT! I FUCKING HATE Anthony!

Anthony is so FUCKING STUPID! He gets 1000 credits for clearing the dungeon. All he needs to do is that and he can upgrade his store. This is the WORST!

How many weeks has he been at this and he hasn't even read the entire idiots guide! I FUCKING HATE this MC. He is so STUPID. He hasn't even cleared the dungeon, which will have horrible consequences no doubt.

What an asshole! Why wasn't he using absorb on all these kills. Free skills! This is so drawn out, the most simple things take forever for this dumb ass MC to work out! So slow and boring.

Nobody is this stupid! Why the FUCK wouldn't he be using absorb from the first kill! Why is he hesitating to use it now. This guy does NOTHING proactive! This character sucks. He is unimaginative, slow to learn or pick up on things and is forgetful of his resources. And he doesn't act, he just stands around a lot. Boring idiot.

Why does this guy ask so many STUPID questions! He has played RPG's before so should know most of what he is asking. It's BORING.

I REALLY hate it when the MC gets important and simple to act on info and doesn't do ANYTHING! Just bind the FUCKING key idiot! It always comes back to bite them in the ass.

More of a Fictional Prose (Light Novel) than a YA series. Choppy transitions and underdeveloped themes,but I am still enjoying its plot. Won’t give up on it just yet...