Status Updates From Black Daffodil

the storyline is good but I'm still having trouble with the way it's written. I started reading the book on the train (four hour journey) so probably gave it more of a chance than I would normally - that's the only reason I'm managing to read it so quickly. now I just want to finish it so I can read something else.

not sure if this is the way it's written or because I'm reading on a kindle but there is a shift in scenes on different paragraphs which are not obviously different scenes. This is quite confusing until you get used to it and know who the characters are, and where they are