Status Updates From The Guardians of Eastgate (...

Good, there are spending a lot of time explaining what they are going to do and not a lot of time actually doing it and it’s not a very long book so I’m a little worried about that but I’m excited to see where it goes

I like the story the main character is interesting and I’m excited to see what happens with her powers and her emotions

I think I just need to skim the rest. The dialogue seems so formal, and it's all telling, no showing. It's a good premise, but it almost feels like a draft, not a final product.