Status Updates From The Last Sun (The Tarot Seq...

This oscillates between : fun character moments and cringe, between interesting enough plot happenings and cringey posturing, sweet moments and cringe tough moments… it feels quite unpolished to me. The dramatic flair or whatever is used too much. The dun dun dun moments are not very effective. But the characters are enjoyable. I mean I’m still reading it so…

Then when it should be than in a published book just makes me a little sad

Okay fine second half is somewhat better