Status Updates From The Cost of Betrayal (The ...

Does okay capturing a humans reaction for this situation

Finally getting better

Finally starling to get interesting. This is the first chapter that’s not set in the main characters home and contains more than just them discussing the details of the case.

The case is finally moving along. But it’s still really slow pace

Still kind of boring because it countries to focus on conversation between Ann and Paul the main characters, with the mystery/cold case being in the background. There haven’t been any scenes outside their home. Each chapter emus just them recapping.

It reads kind of like a diary. A recap of what happens when they go out but time skips them actually going out.

Move very slow. Focuses more on the couple discussing the case rather than the action and intrigue. So far it’s a little boring.