Status Updates From Moonwind

Some of the sentences grammatical structures still make me have to reread. Again probably because of where I live in the world. The book is now easier to follow now that more of the story has come to light. I do love sci-fi and space but some parts of the book feel cheesy. I believe this could be from being written 40 years ago and I’ve never read anything else from this author to see how she writes.

When I first started this book I was very confused about what was happening. It wasn’t until a few chapters in that everything started to make sense. Maybe it’s just me and the part of the world I am from, but at times I find myself re-reading sentences because the way the sentences are grammatically. That being said, I’m still planning on finishing the book and seeing how this story ends.