Status Updates From Chase Calloway (Redemption #2)

5. The job: she seems unqualified and she does have to give a formal job interview. Also its on a weekend...who is doing work and interviews on the weekend?
6. The apartment: she is literally in CA with barely any money and she gets an FULLY FURNISHED APARTMENT BY THE OCEAN for $1,000!!!!!!!!! The unrealistic aspects of the novel is making this book such a turn off to read!!

Her good luck:
1. She gets a plane ticket the moment that she walks in the airport
2. The cab person offers her a ride, becomes her friend, and gives her a place to stay at a motel.
3. The next morning she buys a car, gets a job, and finds a potential perfect apartment.
4. The car: her budget is $4000 and the car is really $5,500, but apparently if she gives the money in cash, she can buy it for 4K????

Okay I'm not too far in, but this book is already so bad! Like the main female character, Kinsley moves from Indiana to California because she finds her BF cheating. She decides to uproot everything, sell her car and buy a plane ticket for CA. Her good luck is just annoying and SOOO unrealistic, it beats Harry Potter.

has this book even been edited? complete outfit change from one scene to the next (going from lbd at a club to shirt and pants in the kitchen straight after getting home)