Status Updates From The Lion's Binding Oath and...

Wow I’m so enamored by the writing!!

I liked the first short story, but the second one is falling short because some of the sentences don’t sound natural.

I really loved the first story in here about the boys herding the sheep and goats. Wonderfully written and the main character showed much bravery. Just love the natural setting. I am partway through the much longer story about Mayxaano - unsure what to think. I can understand the unfairness in her life but its not holding my interest...