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Conall, not Cohen…

As feared, it’s kind d of boring.

A lot of push and pull, both MCs disguising who they really are and Cohen is too much of a stupid labradoodle to realise what’s going on.

?? Andy just finished telling you that he can't use his fate powers to influence anyone or he'll get a life sentence, and you start scheming to have him face down the faerie queen?? Also, Con specifies pitting the queen against the only male norn in existence... is that supposed to be relevant? Does being male change his powers?

Oh wow, this is really early for Andy to be coming clean? Usually these 'misunderstandings' or lies would be drawn out til the big climax or blowout. Kinda refreshing for it to be dealt with early... now when is the "prince" going to do the same

Nothing to ruin a fantasy like setting it in Portland, Oregon. Also.. much as I enjoy Kirt Graves as a narrator, his English accent just ain't cutting it.

I don’t want to dnf this- but if they’re about to sleep together while one of the MCs is wearing a disguise to look like his brother- that’s a hard line for me… we’ll see what happens

Alas, the author has forgotten that even if it is a fairy tale, the audience are not children. Though even older children could find fault with the plot development. 😖

It’s okay, but I don’t know how long my interest will last with the minimal/repetitive (I’m not worthy/I’m hiding) conflict. It’s mostly just intriguing for the world: pure Norse mythology and various creatures creativity. But that’s getting old now.