Status Updates From Black Star Renegades

I can't help but feel it is very slow, despite the various actions taking place.

Having a bit of fun with this one

And btw, Horizon Dawn has to be the stupidest ship name I’ve ever come across. Is there a special reason for reversing the word order, bc that kills any attempted beauty in it - is it for novelty?

I still want to know what happens but this writing is just…not good. The combo of stating things multiple times in a row + misstating what’s happening + explaining reactions wrong - most recent: “he was so mad they said something about his brother” - when they actually said sth abt MC being incompetent + barely mentioned the brother. Just lots of…bad undeveloped writing + characters