Status Updates From Obsession

Does the writing style ever get better, or will it constantly feel like someone is giving a timed summary from a caveman’s POV?First chapters it made sense, she was young and sheltered. Now I’m just confused because every character has a lack of social cues - it’s cringey. idea is fantastic, poor execution. Did she forgot she had to write a book and was like “shit, deadline for this is in 4 days.”