Status Updates From Heartless (The House of Roh...

This is a lot of forced exposition. While this background is important, there should have been a more organic approach to delivering it.

For someone with her background, her lack of suspicions makes no sense. She should be on high alert around everyone, especially for such an obvious trap, but I'm supposed to believe she naively walked into this and thinks it's just a coincidence?

That's not my fault, though. It's sad she's related to a psychopath, but I didn't make him that way. Everyone is avoiding her because of him, not me or anything I said.

Emma is so dense I can barely keep reading

Brandon Rohan had made her feel things she’d thought she was incapable of feeling. After years in the trade, servicing men for their pleasure, she had been sure she could never bear to have a man’s hands on her again. But he had touched her, and she’d wanted more.