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The dialogue between clio and Eric is kind of unbearable

I’m really intrigued so far :3. Zoinked. It’s good. I’m super curious about the first Eric how is he so aware?? I wonder if it’s a scifi ish thing . Time travel or whatever idk

I want to finish this SO bad, but truly what the fuck. It feels like after 150 pages, the author put down the manuscript for 2 years and then finally came back to it with less passionate writing and an honestly bullshit amount of ideas to chuck into the plot.

Okay, so it's nonsense at this point

I'm looking at how much paper is left in this book and like. Realistically, how much more plot is there, and how could it possibly fill out the next 200 pages?