Status Updates From Reckless Behavior

"We spend the rest of the day in the club and find so much money - like, enough to run a small country on - all of it tucked away in boxes and hidden under files." The writing almost has a child-like quality, meaning, the author knows nothing about the topic she wrote, not even how much money could run a small country.

Our MC Santo was sent to prison by his homophobia mafia-boss dad at the tender age of 18. He met his father rival - another mafia-boss the first day in prison. Then the rival boss decided to teach him top secret BDSM skills, so that he could revenge on his father when he got out? And 6 years later, he's out because the rival boss had so much power to do so (but couldn't release himself??). All these in the first 10%

Reading this made me brain-dead. Or, I can read this even when I'm brain-dead. Huh, interesting...

”I’m waiting to hear when Salvatore will be free. I can’t wait for you to meet him. He’s the father we were supposed to have.”
“And yet he used to fuck you senseless.” Luca looks at me strangely.
“He did, and I loved every fucking minute of it. He made me the man I am today. I owe him everything. We owe him everything.” I smirk.
Wtf is this book

“WHAAAT?” I shout out.
No one actually talks like that

Not sure I’m liking the style of writing - it seems to jump all over the place. The dialogue and inner monologues are just odd

As he leans against the wall, I notice the outline of his shaft, rigid in his pants. Fuck! He’s hot! How did I never notice before? Suddenly, he is a feral man and I’m his prey.
What a weeeird passage of text

Ummmm... was that a racist joke about Gabriel?