Status Updates From Artemis

It's a page turner now. A mystery got revealed.

I like the world so far; interesting setting, works well with its statements on socioeconomic issues (working class/poverty doesn’t go away on the Moon’s first civilization unfortunately). I just find Jazz to be a little too irritating, with the humor in general sticking out like a sore thumb. I don’t inherently mind comedy being here, but his just isn’t very funny.

It’s alright so far.