Status Updates From Proof of Love - A Pemberley...

Too many things going on, but will push on as of now...may DNF it

UHG!!! This Elizabeth is so naïve and irrational!!! I can’t believe how foolish she is and not realizing the consequences of her actions. Poor Darcy, he has so much set against him too.

UHG!!! This Elizabeth is so naïve and irrational!!! I can’t believe how foolish she is and not realizing the consequences of her actions. Poor Darcy, he has so much set against him too.

I should say "Poor Lizzy!", but I can't really say that! :P

Be careful what you wish for. The love fest between E & D is getting sickeningly sweet. They're clinging to one another and Elizabeth is weeping - over a week or two separation for estate businesses? In plain sight of the servants?

This version of ODC is completely without dignity, propriety, or fortitude. The novel is starting to drag, even though I know a murder is being planned for one of them.

“Oh, my darling, there is so much for which I need to ask your forgiveness. I hardly know where to begin.”

Slightly mollified. This is definitely not classic, reserved Mr Darcy. It's a younger, emo Darcy. He's wept twice now; once in front of company!

I'm not pleased with Darcy's behavior. He's acting like a douchebag teenage boy! Lizzy is at the whims of his temper and he's a fault finding tyrant. Needs to change SOON. I expect groveling.

I read a sample containing the first 5 chapters. Good writing hooked me. Eep! 9.99 on Amazon! Steep for an indy.
I was feeling self indulgent. I signed up for a free Kobo account and used the $5 off code for new customers, so enjoying this for $4.99