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The author has a bad habit of repeating themselves a lot. Unlike some of the other web novel to light novel fiction I've read this one feels like it didn't take the opportunity to tighten up the writing.

Reading this the next few hours / days. So this one focuses on Mavis and Pauline's flight from their families, and how their families are trying to get them back, Pauline's "father" being the worst offender (tries to kill her companions). So now we're paying a visit to the Beckett company to take some much needed revenge on these criminals. And they do it in typical cute but deadly fashion. Justified self defense!