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"green pupils,"
They're not pupils, that's the iris and the constant mislabeling is jarring in the book. Let this slide the first 2? (or more) times with violet then blue as i thought it was an affectation of the main character. Now, it's with others the MC is in contact with... honestly it's making me consider not finishing the story. 🤷🏼♀️
— Dec 24, 2025 01:03AM
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They're not pupils, that's the iris and the constant mislabeling is jarring in the book. Let this slide the first 2? (or more) times with violet then blue as i thought it was an affectation of the main character. Now, it's with others the MC is in contact with... honestly it's making me consider not finishing the story. 🤷🏼♀️
