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Daryl Ball
Daryl Ball is on page 138 of 158
— Oct 24, 2022 06:24PM Add a comment
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Daryl Ball
Daryl Ball is on page 47 of 158
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Alley
Alley is 74% done
Wait... Wait... Wait.. Now the doctor just tricks the girl into going to the police station and pretends he's a detective... He'd never practice again after a stunt like that. No logical doctor would pull that shut. Who the hell would rate this 5 stars?
— Jan 29, 2020 06:41PM Add a comment
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Alley
Alley is 67% done
Omfg "Two of my finest detectives." Are you kidding me? You literally had to tell them that they needed to remember to have a motive. Nobody would believe these Yahoo's were fine detectives.
— Jan 29, 2020 06:31PM Add a comment
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Alley
Alley is 66% done
I thought this would be good, like The Unbecoming of Maya dryer. I was wrong. So far, it is terrible. It's as if the main officer was intended to be like Fox Mulder, but instead ended up being an incompetent f****stick.

No logical person would make these conclusions. No logical person would believe that theses officers had ever conducted a real investigation. And the doctor.. Omfg.
— Jan 29, 2020 06:23PM Add a comment
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Elena Linville-Abdo
Elena Linville-Abdo is 80% done
Sigh, this is so above the board. A psychiatrist who drags his patient into the polices station and accuses her of murder? Who discusses his cases with a detective without warrant? My eyes are rolling so hard I'm getting dizzy. And Truly is shrieking, panting, and panicking too much. What happened to the simple "said" dialogue tags?
— Jan 17, 2020 01:00PM Add a comment
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Elena Linville-Abdo
Elena Linville-Abdo is 28% done
Hm... not sure if I like this one yet. Seems like Truly's life is just one big dark hole of awfulness. That might be too depressing for my tastes right now.
— Jan 17, 2020 08:51AM Add a comment
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