Status Updates From Falling for the Heartbroken...

I'm somehow managing to get through this despite the errors that I keep finding. And it's not even grammatical or spelling errors, it's continuity. Ms Barton needs a better editor.

I keep getting more and more frustrated with this book. The plot is pretty thin, and the use of 'la' all the damn time is irritating. Also, the author keeps using 'area' to describe where someone left a house. I can't figure out if she means foyer, or the servants area.

Dnf. Not just the formatting, but the lack of any likeable character. These people are spoiled brats.

Oh god, the formatting. I don’t think I can read this, no indents, double, if not triple spacing between paragraphs. It’s incredibly uncomfortable and I wonder if it’s done to increase the number of pages read ? I’ll give it to the end of the chapter ......