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Barn - This one was creepy but also sort of dumb. Points for style.

The Teacher - All these stories are pretty bleak. Gotta read this one in small doses. Again, the metaphor is strong with this one.

Where We All Will Be - This one had potential. Maybe needed to be a bit longer. Maybe hit you over the head with the metaphor too much… but also, I love an ambiguous ending but, Paul, you gotta end at least one of these stories definitively!

Nineteen Snapshots of Dennisport - I liked how this one was told, neat gimmick

The Getaway - Slow start but interesting.