Status Updates From Sidelined

“Raised in church like the good southern girl I was…” It all makes sense why she is such a dumbass.

She is such an immature bitch who blames everything that doesn’t go her way on discrimination against women.

I hate Charlie so much. She is such a pushy bitch who is always testing Connor. What an exhausting person.

Ugh. She does not like cats. Could she get any worse? I hate this heroine.

Just because you, the author, have one of your characters say that there is sexual tension does not make it true. You need to do your job of showing that first.

I hate this dialogue so much: “Are you kiddin’? I love bein’ around people who like me. I’m thinkin’ of askn’ your mom to adopt me.” I cannot stand this redneck hick of a heroine.

This enemies to lovers concept really fell flat because there is zero chemistry between the two. I know the author probably thinks that she is good at writing banter, but she is not.

The banter—if you can call it that—is not particularly amusing or interesting.

She really sounds like an uneducated hick with all of this “fightin’,” “tryin’,” “comin’” nonsense.