Status Updates From The Rest of the Story

It's a nice YA story, but not well written. It feels more like a 2nd draft than a finished copy, with many of the thoughts not feeling fully formed. There are also too many characters, you only remember who everyone is about halfway through. Many characters also start out as central to the story and by the end it's like they don't even exist, adding to the feeling of an unfinished book.

Good so far but it's been a bit slow, not too eventful.