Status Updates From Claustrophilia (The Dark Tr...

giving hannibal. i’m liking it so far but the timeline seems jumpy. like it goes from flashback to present to future multiple times all in the same chapter.

He pulls out at the last possible second. The head rush from that first lungful of oxygen nearly knocks Chris backward. His chest clenches; the fresh air burns his lungs but tastes so sweet. His obedient mouth hangs open, drooling thick, red-streaked mucus.

The plot is interesting, but the grammar is making it difficult to read. This paragraph is talking about two people. Having to reread parts makes it difficult t

Holy motha ballsss like wdym he scooped out his eyes nawwrrrrr

Ganda talgaaaaaa