Status Updates From Mga Batang Poz

Just started today... let's hope I can still understand Filipino. XD

Paano mapapatawad ni Kenneth ang sarili niya by loving himself first???? Paano? Hindi sa pangdadrag, pero seryosong tanong. Love the twist tho!

Sentence construction, whomst??? Repetition of thoughts everywhere but in different phrase. Dialogues are not realistic sa edad ng mga characters.

Maputi, mapulang labi, mapuputing ngipin, at nangungusap na mga mata lang ang alam na description ng author para sa gwapong lalaki. Like, you can extend your descriptive words tho... just saying.

*face palm*

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*snort* Ano daw?

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First part, "Tara, alis tayo." "Sige pero sa malapit lang."

Halfway part of the book, nakarating ng Pampanga at pupunta ng Baguio.

Seryoso????

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And kapag nasa Pampanga ka, madedetect ba ng Grindr ang user na nasa Baguio????

The writing style is really off. Yung mga dialogues? Very unnatural. The story-telling is choppy and all over the place. PURO TELLING, WALANG SHOWING! Ang personality lang ni Luis ay magsabi ng 'fuck' sa dulo ng mga dialogues niya. Ano ba 'to?????

This book started with 5 pages full of amazing praises and reviews tapos ganito mababasa mo? Disppointing!

Something is really off about the author's writing style and the characters' dialogue is unnatural. Pero tatapusin ko pa rin 'to. Hahahaha.

Haven't gotten far yet, but it's interesting so far.

Nice