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Swearing is added very liberally, and the humor just doesn't land. Eyeroll moments. Too much talking about poo and getting too into animal stereotypes. Pretending cats are snobby and self-centered is not humor, it just shows you never had a pet cat that you actually tried to get along with. smh. It starts to be more reasonable as the story goes on, though so far it isn't a terribly exciting adventure.

millennial ahh writing. the humor and language are pretty crass. not really my style of humor but it's fine enough

Okay I don’t typically like comedies (across the board I think I’m too literal for the planned structure of it) but this gets a good few laughs out. It’s very *deep horse voice* remember who you are weird animal girl