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Helping Hands: good beginning, slowish middle, great ending. I’m not sure how I would have improved this slump except maybe you have shortened the story.

Death-Cup: this is more like what i wanted Fossil Figures to be.

Nobody Knows My Name: So suspenseful despite knowing, very early on, how it was all going to end.
Fossil-Figures: I love the concept and the through-line theme of fossils, I just wish I found the story itself more interesting.

Beersheba: An odd little story, one I don't have any major issues with but also didn't connect to much.

The Corn Maiden: Such a beautiful, shocking, and mesmerizing story. I devoured this.

A character's name changed from Brad to Ben for one line and then changed back. Was waiting for that to be brought in as a plot twist or something. Turns out it was just an editing mishap.