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super cringey dialogue. her explaining that she doesn't hookup and him telling her, "i figured, se had a class together last semester and you didjt act kike those other women" .
Ew how do wome that lik to hookup act during class??

Not sure if I’ll finish. I really hate inconsistencies and in Chapter 2 she tells Cain that her mom doesn’t know who her dad is. Then in Chapter 4 they have the entire discussion again. Did none of your proofreaders actually read the book?