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We get a fancy scroll divider to go from the teen girl pages reading about STDs to the mc and supervisor discussing his future, but then not so much as a blank line to go right back to the girls screaming about genital warts. 🫠

I do not need a detailed play-by-play of the Uno game.

Can we put some freaking line breaks in when we jump scenes to different characters??? This book is a prime example of why self publishing in general can't be taken seriously. Some people desperately need EDITORS!

I don't think this Spanish is correct, even when the Spanish-speaking character corrects it...

No transitions or even blank lines between these checklist scenes of every dang character doing random stuff.

We really are gonna get a full outfit description for every single character no matter how minor, aren't we.

No one talks like this 😂🫠

Everyone has a huge chip on their shoulder about something and it's sooo preachy about being politically correct vs prejudiced.

This is painful. Are we gonna get detailed descriptions of everyone's outfits the whole book?

Ope, in this copy there's the last 27 pages of another book in Spanish before this book actually begins!