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I know it's a romance, but Darcy is seriously overdramatic and at times, way out of chacter. There's too much telling and not showing and far too many references to Elizabeth's "fine eyes." Also, Georgiana is a brat. As is Kit. But I do like the invasion of England plotline and want to know how they're going to get out of this mess.

This variation has made a definite left turn from the original, including some character traits, but I guess it's entertaining enough.