Status Updates From Broken Justice

This is painful. So much telling instead of showing. A lot of extra descriptors that make it slow. The prologue was unnecessary. The flashback in the fever dream was enough to get the point across. I stopped reading part way through Chapter 5. Between the excess words & him lusting after someone he sees as a girl, not sure it’s worth it.

Intéressante histoire, remplie de réflexion, un peu d'humour. Choisir de demeurer dans un état émotif vide mais connu ou affronter ses peurs et l'inconnu? Nous avons le point de vue des deux personnages principaux.