Status Updates From Talon the Black (Dragonwall...

There are a fair few typos for such a hyped up book and early doors to have so many yet...but the story and writing style has truly gripped me. I am just desperately hoping the errors become fewer, as a dyslexic reader, they just act as a distraction

Not good so far. The dialogue is childish. The writing style sounds like it was written by an AI prompted to write a YA romantasy.