Status Updates From Talking to Strangers: What ...

I’m starting to see the message, it is, at this point, coming together well. I would put it at a 4/5 (it’s too subtle). He beats around the bush a lot. You, as the reader, have to make the connections and come up with the solutions; he should have taken one of the two burdens for himself. Other than that it’s fine, I’m not upset to have read it.