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Too much description-see?
Montgomery points to a young man perched on a desktop chewing pizza with one hand while deftly transcribing notes with the other. Drake Panarin is an investigator with an advanced degree in accounting from Columbia University. He’s been assigned to Midtown North Homicide from an NYPD special task force working with the Queens DA Economic Crimes Bureau. The bureau investigates financial...

I think I can safely say that I can perform an in-depth autopsy on just about anyone. That's how descriptive and informative this author is.

I am liking the story line, but man does the author like to overly describe every detail. I'm kinda glossing over the droll. Onto the next page...