Status Updates From The String Games

Very edgy subject matter, that tells us something about the writer's courage in tackling an uncomfortable topic.
Gail is a master of 'show, don't tell', as far as the deeper aspects of the story are concerned - there is an element of detective work for the reader to enjoy.
I think readers will also enjoy observing the main character's development across the time-span of the story.

Very edgy subject matter. Gail is a master of 'show, don't tell' as far as the deeper aspects of the story are concerned (of course, Gail 'tells' narrative, but the reader has to sieve what is significant from that which is mundane - like being a detective. I like the time-hops - I hope to learn something from Gail's handling of it for my own WIP.