Status Updates From The Burn of the Underworld ...

Easy read. Very spicy. Not sure it's coming together for me on the characters and plot though.

thank goodness she can fight. that's enough for now to keep me going in reading this

"Please. I’ll go in his place. Let me go instead. The rules say that a volunteer is allowed."

This sounds like some hunger games rip-off lol

7:35 in, i don't think i will finish this one. i can't handle the narration.

about an hour in and the narrations is sooo bad. Pretty sure the narrator has used 10 different voices for the main female character. Her voices gets all squeaky, gosh its awful. Oh and all the males sound like they are from the bronks? Just having a tough time with it.
In honesty, the story feels very unbelievable as well. Not because it is a fantasy, i love fantasy, but the transitions and storyline are not smoot