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Diana Wilson
is 75% done
Embarrassedly ... I. Just. Can't.
Embarrassed-LY
Dead.
— Jun 15, 2020 08:39AM
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Embarrassed-LY
Dead.
Diana Wilson
is 50% done
I really wish the author would use 'said' 99% more of the time. It's distracting when they 'boast', 'cajole', 'query', 'declare', 'placate' and ...jeebus, I'm waiting for them to start ejaculating.
Said.
Period.
(Maybe ask or reply) Cockily? He said cockily? Really? *sigh* The plot is going fine enough but changing the dialog tags would improve my enjoyment ++75%.
— Jun 15, 2020 08:18AM
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Said.
Period.
(Maybe ask or reply) Cockily? He said cockily? Really? *sigh* The plot is going fine enough but changing the dialog tags would improve my enjoyment ++75%.
