Status Updates From Longing for a Cowboy Christmas

A Fairytale Christmas review: 2 stars
I liked Nan well enough and loved Clara, they had a great relationship, but Will fell flat as did the romance between he and Nan.
Nan met and fell in love with Will while he was unconscious. Will doesn’t love Nan until the very end, which is fine since it’s a short overlap but he only seems to love her because the house keeper tells him to.

Whoa....
Literally 4-5 pages ago Clara was calling her dada a snowman and now when Nan asks Clara if she’s ever built one Clara doesn’t know what it is. Poor editing here.

Did the author say “snow cream” when he meant ice cream?

They’re all a little cringe. Why would Gertie and Jake winter NaN to marry a man who doesn’t love her?

This story is a little dated, doesn’t seem to have depth.

I get the emptiness she feels, but she doesn’t want him to leave and he’s been unconscious the entire she’s been around him so far. More to attraction than looks.