Status Updates From Dangers & Goblins

It’s an interesting premise. The characters were interesting but seemed underdeveloped. The text could benefit from a thorough redlining, it got distracting seeing the double words and unexpected contractions caused by predictive typing.
With a bit of polish and some rework here and there it could be very good, I think,
In any event, I’m starting the second book, so we’ll see how it differs, if at all.