Status Updates From Last Gasp

Slow going..waiting for some action. Finally a break in!

“Makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside, doesn’t it?” Michelle said dryly. “That the boy most likely to become the next Unabomber has a crush on you?”

Prime borrow. I like it so far though how her family was murdered is beyond disgusting. Many points of view which isn't my favorite style. I prefer to get info from the main characters and their interactions rather than all these people each getting a few pages each. I don't care about the boys smoking dope or the sheriff's wife, but I suppose it's because you never know who is involved in the murder!