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Reece
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Okay, was this not edited? Was this not written by someone who has a firm grasp of English grammar?
"Below me in the canyon was the majority of the buildings however -- from the long wooden dormitories where we slept to the tall guard huts on stilts that overlooked the fences. And out there in the distance, above us all and on the banks of one sweeping arm of the canyon, was Inyene's keep"
It gets worse.
— Jan 19, 2020 11:58PM
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"Below me in the canyon was the majority of the buildings however -- from the long wooden dormitories where we slept to the tall guard huts on stilts that overlooked the fences. And out there in the distance, above us all and on the banks of one sweeping arm of the canyon, was Inyene's keep"
It gets worse.
Reece
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"They were picking on me of course, their next favorite past time..."
past time? FFS.
— Jan 19, 2020 11:50PM
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past time? FFS.
Reece
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"in the flickering light of the stub of our tallow candles..."
stubs? candle? ffs.
— Jan 19, 2020 11:49PM
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stubs? candle? ffs.
Reece
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Already irritated by this crap comma placement.
— Jan 19, 2020 11:47PM
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Reece
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"There was space for just one more at the very top of my arm -- but that would also be my last, wasn't it?"
Wasn't it? WTF tense is this?
— Jan 19, 2020 11:45PM
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Wasn't it? WTF tense is this?









