Status Updates From The Rise of Ferryn

Its good, a bit confusing sometimes but still good

I’m glad Vance is calling her out right at the beginning for her selfishness.
She’s so self-centered abut this mission, she just trains and train instead of actually working on the “mission” for nearly nine years.

I am enjoying the story, but there are many minor typos, like using the word "to" when it should be the word "two".