Status Updates From Temporary Girl

Not really engaging me so calling it

Alexander explains things through dialogue instead of showing it through action and it's so annoying. Every important thing is told through dialogue after the fact instead of just showing the reader the scenes. And then the characters tell all of their feelings through dialogue instead of just showing what the characters feel. It's so annoying.

Wow. This coming out drama is SO annoying. To center a plot around something so inconsequential makes me not want to finish this.