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Shannon
is 89% done
The story finally got interesting around 50%. There is kind of alot of different things going on and I'm not sure it's all relevant to the story. Sadly, the supporting characters Dana and Marcy are far more developed than the protagonist.
— Mar 04, 2026 07:23AM
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Shannon
is 21% done
It's picking up a little I guess. The main character is naive or clueless maybe. She seems fake
I'm really struggling with the narration and the complete distancing of the reader through compulsive use of 'to be' verbs.
— Mar 04, 2026 01:30AM
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I'm really struggling with the narration and the complete distancing of the reader through compulsive use of 'to be' verbs.
Shannon
is 10% done
So far it's pretty boring and not much is happening. The writing is mostly passive verbs and insecure language.
— Feb 25, 2026 11:04PM
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