Status Updates From Cloudy with a Chance of Wit...

The story finally got interesting around 50%. There is kind of alot of different things going on and I'm not sure it's all relevant to the story. Sadly, the supporting characters Dana and Marcy are far more developed than the protagonist.

It's picking up a little I guess. The main character is naive or clueless maybe. She seems fake
I'm really struggling with the narration and the complete distancing of the reader through compulsive use of 'to be' verbs.

So far it's pretty boring and not much is happening. The writing is mostly passive verbs and insecure language.