Status Updates From Undying Witch: 1918 to 1933...

Sometimes, entire paragraph are repeated... such a waste of reader time.
The second part follows Medea who is almost as antipathetic as her mother so far and Dima continues to be an unlikable character.

Now that she is pregnant, she is shifting accidentally all the time, which would be all right if the author had managed to remember what form she was in in the first place.
So she is in a taxi, young, old, young, young, old, undecided....

Now that she is pregnant, she is shifting accidentally all the time, which would be all right if the author had managed to remember what form she was in in the first place.
So she is in a taxi, young, old, young, young, old, undecided....

Now that she is pregnant, she is shifting accidentally all the time, which would be all right if the author had managed to remember what form she was in in the first place.
So she is in a taxi, young, old, young, young, old, undecided....

The flashbacks are pretty atrocious, they either retail in one sentence what happened a few pages ago or add things that we don't know as if we saw it happened.
The emotion of the characters are all over the place. She seems to be hopping to things and back.
There is about no description of places so far so we can't see where she is only what she is doing.

The paragraphs seem disconnected. There are many repetitions of basic facts. The pace is so rapid that the story is hard to follow and to see where the main character is at time. I mean she is in Russia, the next page she is in Gdánsk, the next page she is in Prague....
Then no matter how you look at it, there is no way you can go from Prague to Florence by going through Poland, Austria and Italy in this order.