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seriously, you drop the phone bomb of the call went through during the fall, and then you fucking SKIP A WEEK? we get NOTHING about her reaction. it is only the start of the conversation and then bam, a week passes.

So many tropes: other woman, deceased fiancé, single father, child with disability,
divorced, dead parents, income problems
BDSM there are others
so many that none are done well for such a short story

She is abrasive and caustic, she is a teacher who has yet to do any teaching.
He is aggressive and randomly a single father who does not have custody of his child.
The story is disjointed, jumpy, missing moments. The insta lust connection is a little fast. I'm still trying to figure out the who the original phone call was to and the subsequent calls. The story is just a mess of miscommunications