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N. von Wolf
is 60% done
The storyline is genuinely captivating and full of potential. But the execution is bad at every turn. Layers of tonal inconsistency, weak prose, and deeply flawed execution. While the story’s dark romance potential is undeniable, it collapses under repetitive scenes, clumsy POV shifts, and glorification of abuse disguised as emotional depth. Halfway through, its promise feels squandered by unchecked sensationalism.
— Dec 16, 2025 05:24AM
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