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Stfnie
Stfnie is finished
Noop, just no... I skimmed to page 223/272 and just no. I’m sorry, I don’t dig this story. Dnf
Aug 24, 2019 07:00AM Add a comment
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Stfnie
Stfnie is on page 82 of 182
And the book could actually use some editing ...
Aug 24, 2019 06:26AM Add a comment
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Stfnie
Stfnie is on page 82 of 182
And why are Bryce’s friends not in the motelroom anymore after he wakes up the first time? Why isn’t he calling them the day after?

I’m going to give it a few more pages and if I don’t get into it (I’m basically cringing at the drama, the explamationpoints and the missed opportunities for the stort), I’ll just dnf.
Aug 24, 2019 06:06AM Add a comment
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Stfnie
Stfnie is on page 82 of 182
I’m actually doubting reading this through to the end.

Why isn’t he realizing that he’s drugged? Why does his gf wants to basically push him away by letting him cheat again on a guy this time? Why is she even his gf if she’s convinced he’s gay?
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Aug 24, 2019 06:05AM Add a comment
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